Strawberry Vampire

Love this game so far, not played all yet but the scenes and the atmosphere are great! I hope you continue and do more games like this in the future :)

Awesome demo! The puzzle took me a few attempts, but I enjoyed my time deciphering it. I also absolutely adored the CGs, especially the petrified tickling one. It was nicely animated and the text was wonderfully detailed in describing what Marywell was feeling during the whole ordeal. My favorite part was when the soles of her feet got scrubbed mercilessly by brushes after getting thoroughly lubricated (great brush SFX, too btw). And the cherry on top of the whole thing for me was when Batty verbalized the audience's thoughts while watching, remarking how cute Marywell looked laughing, crying, and begging.

Hehe, if there was anything I was slightly disappointed by, it was that Marywell ended up crafting her own clothes so early on. Part of me was hoping she'd stay in the nude for a while longer so that all of her tickle spots could be fully exposed and exploited for at least a couple more major CGs. But that's just a me thing, lol.

Loving what I'm seeing so far. Consider me a Day 1 buyer when this is officially released! Keep up the great work!

I encountered a bug where I managed to trigger the light trap scene without advancing the story? I walked into the very edge of it on the right and I was so confused when I didn't find anywhere else to go

Excellent work on the game! Even just from the demo alone, you can tell a ton of effort was put into this, and your team should be very proud from what seems to be your first game!

Regarding feedback, there are points that I wanted to highlight:

Art & UX

• The art & animations are outstanding, and easily ranks as one of best tickle games out there visually!
• I especially love the menu art & animations, however I do agree with the others that menu animations take a bit too long to finish. Some have pointed out about the sfx issue as well.
• As someone who's into tickling + petrification, I think Marywell being frozen wide-eyed, with her mouth open from laughing would be a lot more titillating than eyes closed with a smile. But this is just purely my opinion!
• It would be nice if the ESC key could be added as an alternate way to open/close the menu, since some of us are used to that.
• I notice that it takes 2 clicks to reach the inventory screen. Since the inventory is likely gonna be one of the most used screens, it might be good to consider having a shortcut key for it.

Story

• I really like the story so far! I'm intrigued as to what Marywell's backstory is and why she seems to be travelling from place to place. I hope these are addressed in the full game!
• You might wanna consider adding an option to skip the prologue, especially for those who want to replay the game to find collectibles.
• Love the colourful & distinct personalities all the characters have, including the NPCs! I really like how the game doesn't take itself too seriously.
• I think the dialogue text formatting is a little odd. Many times it doesn't fill out the textbox entirely before the next line.
• In the starting scene outside the city, Marywell said that she was looking for a doctor. I think changing it to "veterinarian" makes it clearer she means for the horse.
• During the scene with the Head Priest, the Captain said: "To my knowledge, she wasn't allowed to hurt anybody in the city". I think what the writer meant here was, "she didn't hurt anybody in the city"?

Hub/Mines Level

• I think you can be a bit bolder with the level design! So far, the levels are essentially straight lines which makes traversal somewhat uninteresting.
• Set dressing can be a little sparse at times, especially in corridors which makes it feel kinda empty.

• At the southern end of the hub, the path splits into two. I think it'll be a good idea to add a path through the wall to connect the two sides to save the player trouble from having to walk around the bath each time, especially when going to see the Witch. (Above the brazier to above the 3 stacks of firewood, perhaps?)
• I really like the bath scenes! Other games would just have the character wash themselves off with a simple description. It's details like these that make a game great!
• Bug: At the cave's entrance, if the player did not call Batty to trigger the dialogue about the magic barrier, then after the demo, the player will be unable to trigger that dialogue with Batty despite the exclamation icon being present.
• Bug: In the mines, at the crevice where you can call Batty to retrieve the marble within, Marywell can step into the crevice and then move around inside the walls.

Plant Level

• I think this is the most interesting part of the demo! It has a unique puzzle where you have to be strategic in the wood you cut, and then adds a twist to the challenge in the second half!
• However, I think the difficulty spike in the puzzle after walking through the leaves is a bit too high, since the previous one was relatively very easy. 
• Furthermore, it's very annoying having to slowly walk through the leaves every time you restart that puzzle. This is mitigated if saving was possible, but there's probably a technical reason why it's disabled (my guess is there's issues in saving the states of the wood?). In that case, maybe shifting the puzzle to the next room would be a better idea.
• I was stumped for a while at the last part, just like a few others. This is due to in the previous room, the player was only guided to the front of the pillar. And since the player was only ever informed that you could interact with it from the front, they wouldn't know that they can interact with it from the sides as well. I would suggest adding emeralds to the sides of the pillar to visually signify that, or have a 2nd pillar in that room and guide the player to interact with it from the side.
• In addition to the difficulty spike I mentioned, the puzzles in the 2nd half are relatively quite easy to the previous puzzle once the pillar thing is figured out, which makes the difficulty curve in this level not very smooth. Perhaps consider breaking the difficult one into two parts instead?

Marbles
I think the most critical issue in the game is currently the marbles. Since the main quest's progress is directly dependent on them, it is super important for the player to know that they exist, however the only time the player is explicity informed about them is by the guy with the hatchet.

Players who go straight to objective markers might be confused by what he's talking about, and might run around the hub talking to people & interacting with random objects not knowing what to do next, which can lead to frustration.

I think the cave entrance is the perfect place to inform the player in a "natural" way. For example, you could add a locked door which the player must find the key to hidden somewhere in the area, before they can enter the hub. This way, they'll naturally come across the marbles during their search, while also setting the tone for the rest of your game, that it is heavily based around exploration. (In other words, try to avoid word-based tutorials as much as possible!)

Final Thoughts
All in all, it's a top-notch tickling game, and I'm super stoked for it's full release! With a few tweaks, I'm sure you guys'll have a great game on your hands! :)

You really know how to make a great game & I'm really looking forward to the full release. Keep up the amazing work >:D

This game is so great, the painting style is really cute, and the story is so interesting.I can't wait to play the official version, by the way, when is the official version of the online? Will there be more foot tickling CG？looking forward to it！

Thanks for such a fun demo!

It's the most high-quality game that I've played so far.The story is interesting and  the character is so cuuuute!

Looking forward to the full version.   (  > w < )

(I'm not very good at English.So I'm sorry if this sentence caused any misunderstanding qwq)

I played through the Demo, and I loved it. This so far the best RPG Maker tickle game I have played. If you keep up this level of quality, I will definitely buy the full version.

I would like to give you some small suggestions for future developments:

- If possible, there should be a way to speed up scenes and dialogues we already went through. If someone wanted to watch a specific scene again, this would make it much easier to reach it.

- I didn't have a problem with the puzzles, but just in case, you might want to implement a 'cheat' option for those, who do have a problem. I don't think they were hard, but many people, who buy these kinds of games, want to rush to the scenes.

- I don't know how this game is going to end, but if it's open, it would be great if there are multiple endings. Perhaps one where Marywell ends up locked away in a dungeon, being tickle tortured forever (The Bad Ending). Another great feature would be a Sandbox mode at the end or after competing the game, allowing one to roam around and to either experience any kind of tickle torture or torturing other characters (Or this could another Ending like The Neutral or The Good Ending). But this last point is just a suggestion, and I wouldn't blame you if your plans for the game do not allow these ideas.

Played through the demo, enjoyed it quite a bit. The plot seems light and easy to get into. For now, at least. Really liked the comedy bits and the lighthearted atmosphere in general. At times felt a bit too vanilla, like when the guy guarding the overgrown part of the cave said 'buck naked' instead of 'butt'. They are prisoners, so I was expecting something more crude. Just nitpicking though.

In terms of UI and visual clarity in general is probably one of the best RPG maker games I've ever played. Looks really polished, which I appreciate a lot.

The scenes, both minor and major, are good. The art style is great, and I liked the little previews before major scenes and the additional bath CG. Also really love how expressive Marrywell is, both in art and text! I was hoping we would get a scene with some other character, but guess I'll have to wait until release. I am in dire need of Venus and Elynn scenes (yes I may have a type :p)

However strange it may sound when discussing a tickling hentai game, I really enjoyed how not overly focused the game actually is on the tickling. It doesn't feel forced when the scenes happen, and I get the feeling that I'm playing an actual game and not just scrolling through interactive porn.

Didn't encounter any major bugs or anything. Minor text error when Batty flies off to find someone to free Marywell from the statue trap, she calls herself Christina. The overgrown plant puzzle felt a little bit unintuitive at first, but when you get how it actually works, then it's a breeze.

All in all, really like the game. It's noticeable that a lot of time and effort have been put into it. Good luck to your team, and can't wait until release!

so I have played a bit now, though I have not gotten completely through it

I like the visuals a lot, it is a high quality tickling hentai game. though it could use more and improved visuals, that is like saying that food costing 200 bucks is probably tastier than something for 10 bucks. all around, I like it.

the fetishes in the game are mostly some which I enjoy - tickling, orgasm torture (whether forced orgasms or orgasm denial/edging, though I cannot tell which one it was). peeing is not for me but luckily it seems to be limited and more of a side thing rather than a main fetish like it is in other tickling games. if it becomes big enough, you could potentially add a "fetish list" to the settings where you can turn off specific fetishes to change the cut scenes by cutting out the pieces that are not liked - if it is within the budget to do that

the translation is good. like, actually good - most hentai games get machine translations. not only do I always get the point across, it feels very well done, like something done by an actual writer, rare it feels like nowadays

the story is questionable, but that is very common in hentai games. you have a premise to get you into the action, and the specific story details do not matter. it does feel somewhat dark, which I like though. like any real religion, their religion too is based upon their hypocrisy, and the condemnation made me actually feel things. so who cares about details, the presentation is key and was done well

I sadly cannot say much about the gameplay, because I got stuck in the first puzzle room with the roots, since there was seemingly no way to cut a root to access the root that needs to be cut next without making it harden. this is especially exemplified because the rules are nto clear - since you get a 2 block thick 3 blocks wide bush you have to go through first, and it only makes the blocks at it's side hard, not those in front - but I assume there is a clear solution. a thought that propped up is that the block after it, aka. the second block in front of you does not harden, but I will have to see

all in all, I wish you luck, because there are too few hentai games and FAR too few tickling games out there. I would love to know more about your dev teams and what kind of things you have planned (whether gameplay or tags, eg. corruption, foot worship etc.)

note of a bug: when in the main menu and you move the mouse over a button, it always makes the "select" sound repeatedly. as in, any slight change of the position of the mouse over such a button causes the sound to be played again, even if the mouse was already hovering over the button before

Needs to be clearer where to obtain Marbles for the quest. Maybe add more "hints" for location.

Quest status gets bugged when I progressed and begin the cutscene for mechanical arms a second time.

Maybe also add a skip to cutscenes if you already watched once.