Strawberry Vampire

I played through the Demo, and I loved it. This so far the best RPG Maker tickle game I have played. If you keep up this level of quality, I will definitely buy the full version.

I would like to give you some small suggestions for future developments:

- If possible, there should be a way to speed up scenes and dialogues we already went through. If someone wanted to watch a specific scene again, this would make it much easier to reach it.

- I didn't have a problem with the puzzles, but just in case, you might want to implement a 'cheat' option for those, who do have a problem. I don't think they were hard, but many people, who buy these kinds of games, want to rush to the scenes.

- I don't know how this game is going to end, but if it's open, it would be great if there are multiple endings. Perhaps one where Marywell ends up locked away in a dungeon, being tickle tortured forever (The Bad Ending). Another great feature would be a Sandbox mode at the end or after competing the game, allowing one to roam around and to either experience any kind of tickle torture or torturing other characters (Or this could another Ending like The Neutral or The Good Ending). But this last point is just a suggestion, and I wouldn't blame you if your plans for the game do not allow these ideas.

Played through the demo, enjoyed it quite a bit. The plot seems light and easy to get into. For now, at least. Really liked the comedy bits and the lighthearted atmosphere in general. At times felt a bit too vanilla, like when the guy guarding the overgrown part of the cave said 'buck naked' instead of 'butt'. They are prisoners, so I was expecting something more crude. Just nitpicking though.

In terms of UI and visual clarity in general is probably one of the best RPG maker games I've ever played. Looks really polished, which I appreciate a lot.

The scenes, both minor and major, are good. The art style is great, and I liked the little previews before major scenes and the additional bath CG. Also really love how expressive Marrywell is, both in art and text! I was hoping we would get a scene with some other character, but guess I'll have to wait until release. I am in dire need of Venus and Elynn scenes (yes I may have a type :p)

However strange it may sound when discussing a tickling hentai game, I really enjoyed how not overly focused the game actually is on the tickling. It doesn't feel forced when the scenes happen, and I get the feeling that I'm playing an actual game and not just scrolling through interactive porn.

Didn't encounter any major bugs or anything. Minor text error when Batty flies off to find someone to free Marywell from the statue trap, she calls herself Christina. The overgrown plant puzzle felt a little bit unintuitive at first, but when you get how it actually works, then it's a breeze.

All in all, really like the game. It's noticeable that a lot of time and effort have been put into it. Good luck to your team, and can't wait until release!

so I have played a bit now, though I have not gotten completely through it

I like the visuals a lot, it is a high quality tickling hentai game. though it could use more and improved visuals, that is like saying that food costing 200 bucks is probably tastier than something for 10 bucks. all around, I like it.

the fetishes in the game are mostly some which I enjoy - tickling, orgasm torture (whether forced orgasms or orgasm denial/edging, though I cannot tell which one it was). peeing is not for me but luckily it seems to be limited and more of a side thing rather than a main fetish like it is in other tickling games. if it becomes big enough, you could potentially add a "fetish list" to the settings where you can turn off specific fetishes to change the cut scenes by cutting out the pieces that are not liked - if it is within the budget to do that

the translation is good. like, actually good - most hentai games get machine translations. not only do I always get the point across, it feels very well done, like something done by an actual writer, rare it feels like nowadays

the story is questionable, but that is very common in hentai games. you have a premise to get you into the action, and the specific story details do not matter. it does feel somewhat dark, which I like though. like any real religion, their religion too is based upon their hypocrisy, and the condemnation made me actually feel things. so who cares about details, the presentation is key and was done well

I sadly cannot say much about the gameplay, because I got stuck in the first puzzle room with the roots, since there was seemingly no way to cut a root to access the root that needs to be cut next without making it harden. this is especially exemplified because the rules are nto clear - since you get a 2 block thick 3 blocks wide bush you have to go through first, and it only makes the blocks at it's side hard, not those in front - but I assume there is a clear solution. a thought that propped up is that the block after it, aka. the second block in front of you does not harden, but I will have to see

all in all, I wish you luck, because there are too few hentai games and FAR too few tickling games out there. I would love to know more about your dev teams and what kind of things you have planned (whether gameplay or tags, eg. corruption, foot worship etc.)

note of a bug: when in the main menu and you move the mouse over a button, it always makes the "select" sound repeatedly. as in, any slight change of the position of the mouse over such a button causes the sound to be played again, even if the mouse was already hovering over the button before

Needs to be clearer where to obtain Marbles for the quest. Maybe add more "hints" for location.

Quest status gets bugged when I progressed and begin the cutscene for mechanical arms a second time.

Maybe also add a skip to cutscenes if you already watched once.